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    dots Submission Name: Slow by Flowerdots
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    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 233
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsSlow by Flowerdots
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    Slow by Flower

    You are here
    You say
    Teasing every breath
    Into reality
    Continual
    Perpetual you whisper out this love

    I am here

    Here behind the day
    Inside the night
    Laying translucent in these configurations of light

    You are here
    In a billion forms
    Of the message of love
    Incapable of judgement
    Love unconditional without hell

    Slow by flower
    We grow
    Slow by flower we understand
    And in our faces of grey
    you hold perception
    embraced

    For all your questions
    Our choices remain
    we walk through the halls of traveller
    And dance through the unexplained

    My voice echoes daily
    A susurration voiced to a thunderclap
    A single drop of rain
    Calling
    I am talking
    To you

    What is it that you do not know
    What is it that you do not perceive
    Inside these constructs you have created
    Everything is me

    Slow by flower
    Time in time breathes
    Speaking a dawn
    Where the seeds of your heart
    Are seen

    It will only take a moment
    I am a moment of clarity
    I am here
    I am now
    You say
    I am sipping this wine
    And writing these lines
    To read them in return

    If only
    You
    If only
    If only


    If only…………….




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