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I love you Kirkland

Author: sravenlyn
ASL Info:    17/f/NJ
Elite Ratio:    2.13 - 21 /58 /67
Words: 166
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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I love you Kirkland

Do you know how to spell love?
With the feathers of a white dove?
Can you taste the happiness that lay in your mouth?
Can you feel the feeling that has no doubt?

I love you with all of my heart
I dont believe but I pray we never part
Having your tender hands touch my skin
you are the sweetest sin

I hope you know you value
If you dont allow me to show you
I miss you when your not in town
I miss you just because your not around

But its when you're here that my world spins
When the wind blow gently against my skin
When the sun shines so brightly upon our heads
When the moon light glows around our beds

You are what I've been looking for
I've found the end of the broken heart tour
Til death do us part
I give you my heart.

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