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Reality bites back prouloge Naruto version

Author: truefruit06
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this is the prolouge to a fun story im writing keep reading please!

Reality bites back prouloge Naruto version

Me: yo everybody welcome to the island right off the shore of sunny Japan. I'm your host Ronnie Franklin and over the next ten weeks our ten competitors will test their limits and maybe walk away alive and with 1000000 dollars now lets meet our contenders

a boat drops off a blond boy
Me; naruto my man what is up
Naruto: good to be here Ronnie

another boat drops of a girl with 2 brown buns
Me: ten ten
Ten Ten: this is quite a surprise...
Naruto and Ten ten stare at each other
Naruto: I'm naruto
Ten Ten: ten ten
another boat a black haired boy
Me: sasuke
Sasuke: hey... what is this place
Me; oh you'll find out soon enough
a pink haired chick is dropped off
Me:: sakura
Sasuke: see you by the fire beautifull
Saukra: go to hell!
another boat a boy with red hair
Me; Gaara
Gaara: ugh kill me now.
next boat
Me: neji whats up man
Neji: nothing much bro
another boat
Me: kiba
Kiba: well this'll be fun
next boat
Me: shikamru the smartie
Shikamaru: hello...
Ino: hello everyone
Me: not to shabby
last boat
Me;Hinata hello beautifull
HInata: he-hello.
Me; well now that everyone is here lets start by dividing our teams when i call your name.. step forward.. Naruto, hinata, Ten ten, Gaara, and ino you are team one team Fire
and the rest of you shikamaru, kiba, sasuke sakura, and Neji you are team 2 team Water.
now go get some food and prepare your self beacuse our first challenge will begin in 1 hour...

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