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    dots Submission Name: Life..dots
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    Author: LanndonJames
    ASL Info:    17/FEMALE/Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    1.98 - 6/6/5
    Words: 178
    Class/Type: Rant/Being a Teen
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    dotsLife..dots
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    What do people care if there is someone on the top of a roof?
    Nothing, unless that person is loved or cared for.
    Nothing, unless that person is a celeberty.
    What should that world fo if someone did jump off of the roof.
    Just move on, because it was another depressed person gone in the world.
    Just forget, about that person because she/he's in a 'better' place.
    But how do you know if it's heaven or Hell that the people went to?
    How do you know that the person even believed in Heaven or Hell.
    How do you know how they feel when they're up there?
    You don't unless those people confined it into you, even then you cannot tell because they told you that out of trust.
    How do you know if a person is mentally disturbed.
    You can't.

    What I'm trying to say is,
    that no matter how people try and relate to
    other's problem's
    they cannot. THey don'tknow how they feel,
    What their thinking. Or how they think of themselves.




    Submitted on 2008-10-07 22:42:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Ehrm...

    you dont make a word of sense...

    No one can talk to the dead,if you knew what was on the other side whats the point in living,thatd be cheating!

    There is no answer to that kind of rubbish,it just wasts your time questioning it all,

    But as for your argument

    people CAN relate to other peoples problems (or else your in denial and want to feel exclusive)

    That is all...

    -Craig
    | Posted on 2008-11-30 00:00:00 | by Raphael | [ Reply to This ]


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