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    dots Submission Name: She's Not Theredots
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    Author: Demoncat
    ASL Info:    14/F/USA
    Elite Ratio:    1.18 - 1/5/11
    Words: 57
    Class/Type: Poetry/I am dead inside
    Total Views: 940
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    Bytes: 338



    Description:
       Telling about a dead girl.


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    dotsShe's Not Theredots
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    She's lying there not breathing
    She's not broken, you can't fix her
    She is just there like a lifeless puppet
    She has her eyes open to show a gray shine eyes.
    She has rubys all around her body
    She has a Diamond comming out of her dim eyes.
    She loved you, Look at what you have done.




    Submitted on 2008-10-08 00:31:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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