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Submission Name: Bound <sex> dots

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Author:	Morsketch
ASL Info:	21/F/TX
Elite Ratio:	3.6 - 27/26/26
Words:	53

Class/Type:	Poetry/Serious
Total Views:	557
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	320

Description:
For all: "God" is a word used to represent a very loose concept in this poem; a word with a special meaning to me and someone else. Not as interpreted in it's common definition.

Mostly for him: This is very minimalistic for as long in coming as it has been. It will remain so. I believe it's the clearest representation I'm ever going to come to the emotions, though not the most beautiful.

Bound <sex> dots

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Every time you drive away, you take a little more of Me,
Smoke kicks up,
More of a shell you leave,
Am I absorbing you or are you destroying me?

Break my heart again and my self may not restore,
Because you’re right,
We are bound now,
By GOD forevermore.

Submitted on 2008-10-08 03:19:56 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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This made me hurt inside. It made me think of an old fling I had. Neither of us could make it work. Wording was kinda a vague and it was on the short side. But it did invoke feeling and that is a strongsuit. Nice
| Posted on 2008-10-08 00:00:00 | by bigohhh1 | [ Reply to This ]

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