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    dots Submission Name: Words from my heartdots
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    Author: StylerDen
    ASL Info:    29/Male/Malaysia
    Elite Ratio:    2.98 - 38/59/51
    Words: 83
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 634
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    Description:
       Its not much, but its words from my heart :)
    to the love of my life, Dear Abigail.


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    dotsWords from my heartdots
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    After all these times,
    I cant close my eyes,
    Cause everytime I do,
    I see an image of you.

    You’ve haunted me,
    Like a wild lion roaring to my heart,
    Where one day apart,
    Spans an extraordinary cut.

    I just miss you so much,
    Words are not enough,
    Just to be in your arms,
    Its then where my heart jumps.

    Now I make a vow,
    To take this humble bow,
    I will never leave you,
    Not whatever, no matter how.




    Submitted on 2008-10-08 12:48:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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