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    Author: Aknahlij_d 1
    ASL Info:    17/Male/Loueezy
    Elite Ratio:    3.52 - 369/516/136
    Words: 363
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 936
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 2154



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    letís wipe the slate clean, or at least pull the pieces of feces off and buff it
    fuck it, letís just take this bit of independance and love it
    because i canít think of anything else iím having trouble with
    iím at a lack of cash and iím sell-out quicker than anybody who does a commercial for double-mint
    if weíre at odds, life ainít even, so if youíre seething
    and its because of me, iíll consider this a lonely evening
    and please repeat it to me, whether it be love or distrust
    cuz if its honest and its flying from your cockpit, it fits
    iím disgusted with this so much, that sometimes
    iíll put bamboo shoots in cutiles, so when it comes time to be truthful
    iíll lie with smile radiant, telling the operator that this relationship is fruitful
    and watch the marks scatter, this heart is dark matter
    crushed like old flattery, the after shot, Albert got fatter
    Jared stayed slim, and donít these honest cats hate him
    cuz they canít eat anymore cuz their flames donít wanna date them
    shame, if only i could take your reciept
    and return you your moments that i lost beneath the drivers seat
    andy, you know you can have anything you want
    and melissa was my sister, but to you sheís just a cunt
    but lucky for you sheís dumb and gave into what you pitched
    i mayíve lost a couple friends, but gained a couple bitches
    if the situation wouldíve been switchedÖ
    wait rewind,
    it hurt my brain to think of something so against my design
    i you live well and i hope this heartbreak sits still
    while it whithers in your stomachs, because i know you two loved itÖ

    Been left by the wayside so many times
    I'm beginning to learn the way back
    To the road where the souls go to meet they Lord
    And i wanna go back there no more

    And i been learning how to suprise myself
    so when yall decide to talk, i can rewind myself
    and say some shit to summarize the pain i felt
    when the people i cared for can't explain theirselves




    Submitted on 2008-10-08 20:15:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      holy crap kid. what's going on? you sound pissed.

    you are really good with metaphors, i don't know if i've told you that before. I really like these lines:
    "shame, if only i could take your reciept
    and return you your moments that i lost beneath the drivers seat"

    the last two paragraphs were good too.

    later kid.
    | Posted on 2008-10-09 00:00:00 | by AngelOutlaw | [ Reply to This ]


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