Don't you just love going back to old poetry? It's just a curious mixture of cringe-worthy badness and fond nostalgia. It's good to look back and remember where we came from and how we started, now and again. Thanks for sharing a bit of your past with us.
This poem has good potential. I felt like the repetition could use some strengthening in the wording. Maybe use some more intense words and use something to pull the reader in more to get your point across. I felt like there was no real purpose of your poem. But if you work on it I know it has potential to become a great piece of work. Good luck!
Submission Name: As I Go
