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    dots Submission Name: Thank Youdots
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    Author: Blackphoenix14
    ASL Info:    17/male/AR
    Elite Ratio:    1.78 - 26/87/67
    Words: 116
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 688
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    dotsThank Youdots
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    I have never told you
    "Thank You"
    For bringing joy and happiness to my life
    And helping me to discard all my strife

    A boy that was once lost
    Is now safe and secure
    Thanks to YOU
    Any trial can I endure

    I feel myself trembling
    As I reach to touch your skin
    I'm struggling to hold back
    As my passion burns within

    When you turn and look at me
    My heart burns with desire
    Just a simple touch from you
    And my body catches fire

    So be my life, be my soul
    Be my heart with extra beats
    Thank you for being my special love
    I finally feel complete




    Submitted on 2008-10-09 02:29:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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