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    Author: MaxHam
    ASL Info:    20/m/NH USA
    Elite Ratio:    2.43 - 60/131/105
    Words: 46
    Class/Type: Poetry/Political
    Total Views: 697
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    Description:
       Some political poetry for thought. Personally I think I could not have found a more perfect title.

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    dotsFigure of speechdots
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    Get ready for change.
    I am your wallet.

    Get ready for hope.
    I am your pauper.

    Get ready for war.
    I am your general.

    Get ready for disaster.
    I am your hurricane.

    Get ready to be saved,
    For I am your leader.




    Submitted on 2008-10-09 02:43:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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