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    dots Submission Name: Faded Glorydots
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    Author: MaxHam
    ASL Info:    20/m/NH USA
    Elite Ratio:    2.43 - 60/131/105
    Words: 54
    Class/Type: Poetry/Political
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    Description:
       Another political poem for thought. And again if you would like to join the cause for the needy and maybe even get your name out there give me a message, e-mail or the myspace page. My e-mail is Krikel66578@yahoo.com the myspace page is
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    dotsFaded Glorydots
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    The poor get poorer.
    The right get richer.
    The young have no chance.
    The old die at a glance.

    The fighters lose.
    The winners win.
    The battle is old.
    The war is cold.

    Don't forget the children.
    The children have been forgotten.
    Their voices are ignored.
    The after math of faded glory.




    Submitted on 2008-10-09 02:46:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      well said short and too the pint i am glad you posted it so true so true
    | Posted on 2008-10-10 00:00:00 | by layDsayD | [ Reply to This ]


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