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Author: dismentled
ASL Info:    26/M/"South of Heaven"
Elite Ratio:    4.06 - 625 /583 /217
Words: 170
Class/Type: Lyrics /Gothic
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was born a man
Can’t wake up
remember who I am
and I can’t make right,
Can’t wake up
fallen from the light…

and if I need you
I will push you away!(away)
Can’t see through you
so instead you decay
I scream “I love you”
but, don’t make a sound
I swear I see you,
lying, 6 feet under-ground

I Am God
but, feel a man
All is Gone
fell through my hands

And if I love you
will I push you away?
Scream, and see through you
still you decay?
if I still need you
will you not make a sound
I swear I see you
lying, 6 feet under-ground…

I am man
was born a god
spill my blood
but it’s not enough
I wake up
fallen from the light
All is gone
and I can’t make right
Was it all really
just in my hand?
…wont wake up
To remember who I am!

Submitted on 2008-10-09 14:39:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Just like the first time I read it, this still screams manson-ish to me in intent, but a little pumpkins? in actual execution. sorry for the references, just trying to give you an idea of what it sort of seems like-you know of course, there's no comparing you to anyone :). in intent or otherewise :P

This seems even more sad to me than some of your more obviously mournful writing; even as being (or simply seeing) himself as god, he can't right the things that are with him. An interesting idea, yet apparently incomprehensible to a lot of people, that a god could be more tormented and struck with pain than any other being. It's interesting too, just a slight conflict of desires? or uncertainty even?

the longing to see oneself as above needing anyone or anything- so much so that anyone wanted or needed would have to be pushed away- yet the unwanted acknowledgement that none of that needing will ever go away. not even 6 feet underground.

would it offend you at all if I said this was beautiful? in the most tragic way possible, of course.

I love you angel, and despite your god complex, we have to remember being god would be no fun :P

| Posted on 2009-01-15 00:00:00 | by silent_death12 | [ Reply to This ]

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