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    dots Submission Name: suicides the way to godots
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    Author: StainedxBlades
    ASL Info:    23/f/ MA
    Elite Ratio:    1.76 - 8/13/24
    Words: 148
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotssuicides the way to godots
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    why do we have to feel this way
    how come our problems never go away
    i love you with everything i am
    you don't see it so u tell me to scram
    i worry everytime you walk out that door
    each time it hurts me more and more
    i try to drink it out of my head
    that usually causes more problems instead
    i wanna runaway with you
    somewhere no one can get to
    i want it to be you and I
    up until the day we die
    tell me now if you don't see it that way
    cuz you are wut i strive for day after day
    i don't want to hurt you
    but somehow i always do
    you are my heart and soul
    without you i'm stuck in a hole
    if i didn't have you all i would know
    is suicide thats my way to go




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