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    dots Submission Name: suicide and lullabysdots
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    Author: StainedxBlades
    ASL Info:    19/f/ Mass
    Elite Ratio:    1.76 - 8/13/24
    Words: 85
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    suicide and lullabys
    my life is your worst fear
    stuck in the walls of my mind
    can't escape
    all i want is to get out
    but the only way to get my wish
    is to give in to my suicidal tendancies
    i'm going insane
    knowing i can't stop this pain
    everytime i try
    someone stops me
    why do people hate me so much
    why can't they just let me die
    i know once i'm gone
    they'll forget me
    so why are they keeping me here?




    Submitted on 2008-10-09 20:25:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i agree wit u about thinking people will forget about after u die i know that feeling well
    | Posted on 2008-11-02 00:00:00 | by blackenedheart | [ Reply to This ]


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