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    dots Submission Name: you, my lovedots

    Author: StainedxBlades
    ASL Info:    23/f/ MA
    Elite Ratio:    1.76 - 8/13/24
    Words: 220
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsyou, my lovedots

    you are in fact a part of me
    you are the keeper of my heart, my soul,
    my love
    the keeper of life
    together we are a whole
    for i am half empty without you
    my every being is frayed and tattered
    flung on a pole and called a flag
    for all to watch me flail
    my every experience is the wind
    slowly unstringing me
    one thread at a time
    you are the one person
    who took me down
    my last thread still blowing in the wind
    you found as many threads
    that have not disapeared
    and you did what no one would
    fix me
    you fix me
    for the missing threads
    you make your own
    putting extra love and care
    into each fiber
    as you slowly string my life back together
    I am loved
    one glance
    is one thread
    every ounce of you
    fills the wholes of my life
    is what you've created
    It is what you gave yourself
    through me
    I love you
    and my once tattered being frays
    everytime i look away from you
    my only medicine
    is every memory of you
    my body and mind
    crave you
    like nicottine
    i can't let you go
    you're my guilty pleasure
    my habit i won't dare break
    I feel love
    a constant reminder
    of you,
    My love

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