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    Author: MaxHam
    ASL Info:    20/m/NH USA
    Elite Ratio:    2.43 - 60/131/105
    Words: 62
    Class/Type: Poetry/Political
    Total Views: 575
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 393



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       Please join my cause. This is a sample of the kinds of things that I will be submitting to it....plus many more other artists and authors.


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    Watch the energy flow
    Down the drain to oblivion.
    She dies as we ignore her illness.
    Better late than never.
    Better sick than dead.
    It's going to take many years,
    To nurse her back to size.
    Fight your war
    Kill for oil, it all won't matter.
    When everything is said and done,
    None of us will have a leg to stand on.




    Submitted on 2008-10-10 03:11:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is amazing...it's short, but it lacks nothing. I soooo support your cause. BRAVO! over and over!
    Dominique
    | Posted on 2008-10-10 00:00:00 | by DearlyDeparted | [ Reply to This ]


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