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    dots Submission Name: For my frienddots
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    Author: all2rest
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    Words: 157
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       I have all the best friends


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    dotsFor my frienddots
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    There's so much I can say and so little I can do.

    Before I really knew you I didn't think so much of you.

    Not that I didn't care or that I thought bad of you.

    You were just another friendly face, nothing more nothing new.

    But then I got to know the person you are inside and believe me when I tell you, she's beautiful and bright.

    you are a great friend, one that cannot be replaced and I just want to thank you for showing me such grace.

    I never would have thought I'd be so close to you and I can say for certain I know this friendship to be true.

    So again I say thank you from the bottom of my heart you're one of my greatest friends
    one of my strongest allies

    To my friend of friends, whom my prayers will never part.




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