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    dots Submission Name: Kira-(killer)dots
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    Author: shadow of death
    ASL Info:    17/M/baltimore
    Elite Ratio:    3.58 - 38/53/34
    Words: 339
    Class/Type: Lyrics/
    Total Views: 678
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 2862



    Description:
       death note ending 2 song english
    death note rules


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    dotsKira-(killer)dots
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    Everlasting depression, this one page
    Fleeting tactics, to those eyes
    Without supplication, evil in law, connecting toward prison

    Note with deadly poison, harboring fear at earthly desires
    Incessant drool at delusional lies

    Judgment, prattling on of crime unification
    Who knows how to break the deadlock?

    World of acquittal
    Words of sanction

    An acquired fever, truly "death pirates"
    Redeem the game of law

    Despair the Billy
    Now, morals
    Come, unstoppable eraser rain
    Despair the Billy
    Now, morals
    Come, unstoppable eraser rain

    Unstoppable eraser rain

    Crimson-colored song of destruction
    Won't it end?
    How long has it been half noise?

    Have ya got "that" which lies dormant within society?
    Who can overwrite it, the filth of the world?
    The earth astir from a chain of annihilation
    Master, obliteration, fated self-destruction

    World of acquittal
    Words of sanction

    An acquired fever, truly "death pirates"
    Redeem the game of law

    Despair the Billy
    Now, morals
    Come, unstoppable eraser rain
    Despair the Billy
    Now, morals
    Come, unstoppable eraser rain

    Unstoppable eraser rain

    Love, battle of wits, tension
    Egoistically bent sadist
    Iron hammer of fragmented evil
    Lives snatched away

    Saturated with scoundrels, urgent, murder of criminals
    Verdict! "Human rights," "trouble," "hatred"
    Repentance spilling viscera
    Snickering shinigami, why this consequence?
    Truth, no one knows the misery

    "Kira"
    We are the "Kira"
    My name is "Kira"
    Even your "Kira"

    "Kira"
    We are the "Kira"
    My name is "Kira"
    Even your "Kira"

    Above is carnage of a dark funeral,
    Truth-debate-peace-error, regret,
    Many thousands of years, pity

    Above is carnage of a dark funeral,
    Truth-debate-peace-error, regret,
    Many thousands of years, pity

    Violence, turbulent times, despair and pain

    Despair the Billy
    Now, morals
    Come, unstoppable eraser rain
    Despair the Billy
    Now, morals
    Come, unstoppable eraser rain

    Dancin' bloody heart
    Love, the thunderous color tone is life
    Dancin' bloody heart
    Love, the thunderous color tone is life

    It's an unstoppable fate, chained race




    Submitted on 2008-10-10 17:49:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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