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    Author: MumE039sGirl
    ASL Info:    46 Ireland
    Elite Ratio:    2.41 - 14/23/17
    Words: 116
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    He sneaks in my room nearly every night
    He isn’t so brave as to turn on the light.
    I love you so much; I want you to feel good
    To feel like you know that every woman should.

    This is our secret, that you cannot share,
    But I know for a fact that you wouldn’t dare.
    I know that you fear of losing my love,
    I am all that you have my little dove.

    He only wants sex, I know deep inside
    But what can I do, I have nowhere to hide.
    My overweight burden I carry each day
    When will it ever just fade, fade away




    Submitted on 2008-10-10 21:31:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      An very good piece, right from the heart I felt, writing with ryhme is difficult at times but you do this so well, your way with words is excellent, well done indeed.


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    | Posted on 2008-10-12 00:00:00 | by jamar2 | [ Reply to This ]
      This is written beautifully, and on such a difficult subject. I admire your use of punctuation, and the excellent structure and rhyme scheme you have developed into the poem. Is this based on reality?
    | Posted on 2008-10-10 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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