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    dots Submission Name: In my eyes (Finnish Version)dots
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    Author: Shadow24968
    ASL Info:    16 Male
    Elite Ratio:    2.56 - 69/72/34
    Words: 111
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Romance
    Total Views: 557
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 770



    Description:
       Its kinda like a short song I wrote on my new acoustic guitar, for a very special person in my life right now


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    dotsIn my eyes (Finnish Version)dots
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    Olet yksi Rakastan ikuisesti lisää
    Zoe, minä tarvitsen sinua olemaan minun
    Sinä puhtaimmillaan sielu olen koskaan tiedä
    Kun sydän niin kulta ja jumalallinen

    Olet enkeli maapallon
    A tähdenlento
    Jotain voin koskaan päästä irti
    Ei edes onni tai kuuluisuus

    Olet kuin kuutamo katse
    Ja sen vain siksi, että rakastan sinua
    Että olen vaalia näitä kohtalokkaan päivän
    Under a lifetime asettaa meille kaksi

    Oma polttava palo
    Omat yksi loistava tähti
    Omat vain aistillinen halu
    Tämä on lyhyt, mutta mielekäs runo sinulle
    Koska minä rakastan sinua kalliisti enemmän kuin voisi koskaan tiedä
    Vaikka etäisyys on kaukana




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