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    dots Submission Name: Speak Your Minddots
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    Author: Sacred Sindy
    ASL Info:    30 female in Portland, Or
    Elite Ratio:    6.36 - 151/128/34
    Words: 101
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 1446
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 899



    Description:
       <meh> >.<

    please refer to the post that is written under my poem from 'ever'. i like that much better than mine.


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsSpeak Your Minddots
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    Speak For Yourself

    My poetry is not political.
    It's not the what's broadcasted
    and what's buzzed about-
    The polls
    Votes
    Opinions
    Debates
    Show offs
    One ups
    Tax cuts.

    My poetry is not sensational.
    It's not the who's who
    or the gossiped about at-
    The check out rack
    E-true Hollywood
    Perez Hilton
    Rants
    Raves
    Rumors
    Red carpet

    My poetry is sacrificial.
    It's my reputation;
    my life spliced and split
    Into words
    Commas
    Pronunciations
    Dissertations
    Vibrations
    Authentications
    Liberations.

    I hear it's not too common now-a-day
    to have your own voice.

    Are you listening? Because you shouldn't be.




    Submitted on 2008-10-11 06:54:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Are you listening?

    to the implanted, distended
    imbedded, upended
    tactless and vacuous
    mindless, unmiraculous
    reek of foul words
    in three minute increments

    or hadn't you heard?


    Just some thoughts about the vacuum of space communication has become. It's good to see you post again, ma'am.

    Bill
    | Posted on 2008-10-11 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ]
      my poetry listens close
    to the tongues of those
    she thinks worthy to
    teach her a trick or
    three then flips it
    feels it breathes it
    and does her own
    thing

    my poetry bleeds from
    the ears of whats been
    heard on the t.v.
    radio talk show host
    thinking what he knows
    is most certainly
    everything

    turns it off
    applies it
    accepts or
    denies it
    realizes
    you
    gotsta
    learn
    to cook
    before
    you fry

    walks where you walk
    sees what you see
    hurts the same hurts
    loves the same way

    nothing new under the sun

    but dreams it differently


    (i like your poem.)



    | Posted on 2008-10-11 00:00:00 | by ever | [ Reply to This ]


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    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.


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