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Speak Your Mind


Author: Sacred Sindy
ASL Info:    30 female in Portland, Or
Elite Ratio:    6.36 - 151 /128 /34
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Class/Type: Poetry /Serious
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<meh> >.<

please refer to the post that is written under my poem from 'ever'. i like that much better than mine.


Speak Your Mind



Speak For Yourself

My poetry is not political.
It's not the what's broadcasted
and what's buzzed about-
The polls
Votes
Opinions
Debates
Show offs
One ups
Tax cuts.

My poetry is not sensational.
It's not the who's who
or the gossiped about at-
The check out rack
E-true Hollywood
Perez Hilton
Rants
Raves
Rumors
Red carpet

My poetry is sacrificial.
It's my reputation;
my life spliced and split
Into words
Commas
Pronunciations
Dissertations
Vibrations
Authentications
Liberations.

I hear it's not too common now-a-day
to have your own voice.

Are you listening? Because you shouldn't be.




Submitted on 2008-10-11 06:54:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Are you listening?

to the implanted, distended
imbedded, upended
tactless and vacuous
mindless, unmiraculous
reek of foul words
in three minute increments

or hadn't you heard?


Just some thoughts about the vacuum of space communication has become. It's good to see you post again, ma'am.

Bill
| Posted on 2008-10-11 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ]
  my poetry listens close
to the tongues of those
she thinks worthy to
teach her a trick or
three then flips it
feels it breathes it
and does her own
thing

my poetry bleeds from
the ears of whats been
heard on the t.v.
radio talk show host
thinking what he knows
is most certainly
everything

turns it off
applies it
accepts or
denies it
realizes
you
gotsta
learn
to cook
before
you fry

walks where you walk
sees what you see
hurts the same hurts
loves the same way

nothing new under the sun

but dreams it differently


(i like your poem.)



| Posted on 2008-10-11 00:00:00 | by ever | [ Reply to This ]


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