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    dots Submission Name: WOODLANDdots

    Author: MumE039sGirl
    ASL Info:    46 Ireland
    Elite Ratio:    2.41 - 14/23/17
    Words: 91
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    I walk your corridor, dark and deep,
    Across your stream I gladly leap.
    A roof of green, sun seldom seen,
    Uplifted boughs that stretch and preen.

    So proud and soft, your mossy paths,
    Dappled through with fairy raths.
    Your hidden children meek and shy,
    Not often seen by the human eye.

    A mouse, a mole, a tiny rabbit in a hole,
    Take meager shelter in your verdant bole.
    A troubled mind can comfort seek,
    So solid and steadfast your mighty teak.

    Submitted on 2008-10-11 19:45:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      love this piece, the flow with all your work is fantastic willl fav this one if I may, well done indeed.

    | Posted on 2008-10-12 00:00:00 | by jamar2 | [ Reply to This ]
      i find a lot of comfort and solitude , while taking a walk in the woods.away from busy streets, the stress of normal life. i like it more in the autumn myself, when the sun shines against the red and yellow leaves, the feeling of the dry leaves under the feet, playing hide and seek with my son.thats what came to my mind after reading your poem, a pleasant peacefulness.
    i really enjoyed your poem,different from the poems i,ve usually seen on this site.all in all great poem,

    | Posted on 2008-10-11 00:00:00 | by eyeless in gaza | [ Reply to This ]

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