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    dots Submission Name: my mind is floodeddots
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    Author: StainedxBlades
    ASL Info:    19/f/ Mass
    Elite Ratio:    1.76 - 8/13/24
    Words: 197
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 93
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    dotsmy mind is floodeddots
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    My mind is flooded
    with thoughts of suicide
    i can't tell anyone
    i just want to run and hide

    I don't want to do it
    but it wont go away
    mostly because
    i hurt you more each day

    my ming floats
    from death to you
    you can't beleive me
    when i tell you the truth

    people keep telling you
    that i'm no good
    i want them to die
    i wish that they would

    I've finally found
    someone who sees the good in me
    why can't everyone else
    just fucking let us be

    can no one be happy
    the one time that i am
    I just want to take a gun
    and make my head go "bam!"

    I hate how no one
    can just let me feel good
    I wish they'd go away
    I wish they understood

    no one knows
    how i fell inside
    i get so scared
    but i choose not to hide

    no one can see
    what its like to be me

    no one cares
    how i feel so scared

    and i don't expect you
    to beleive me when i tell you whats true




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