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Submission Name:
my mind is flooded
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Author:
StainedxBlades
ASL Info:
19/f/ Mass
Elite Ratio:
1.76 - 8/13/24
Words:
197
Class/Type:
Poetry/Serious
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my mind is flooded
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My mind is flooded
with thoughts of suicide
i can't tell anyone
i just want to run and hide
I don't want to do it
but it wont go away
mostly because
i hurt you more each day
my ming floats
from death to you
you can't beleive me
when i tell you the truth
people keep telling you
that i'm no good
i want them to die
i wish that they would
I've finally found
someone who sees the good in me
why can't everyone else
just fucking let us be
can no one be happy
the one time that i am
I just want to take a gun
and make my head go "bam!"
I hate how no one
can just let me feel good
I wish they'd go away
I wish they understood
no one knows
how i fell inside
i get so scared
but i choose not to hide
no one can see
what its like to be me
no one cares
how i feel so scared
and i don't expect you
to beleive me when i tell you whats true
Submitted on 2008-10-12 05:28:02
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