Description: im at work and i just started writing, any and all comments are appreciated!!
(if you're familiar with the band Bush they heavily influenced this esp. the "everyone and none" part because in "Swallowed" he says "im with everyone and yet not"_
ain't no costume party
but i got my mask
a crowded room
music full blast
even in dead quiet
won't hear a thing
don't even want to
hear my phone ring
dying inside
in the prime of life
cast aside
tumbled like dice
always come up snake eyes
venomous bite
i dont want want to stun
but before this is done
let's make one thing crystal clear
with everyone and none
dont ask me why
'cuz i don't know
planted seeds of doubt
are sure to grow
can't say for sure
if or why im here
going down in sea for one
it's too late
the undertow has won
partys over
people filter out
musics off
nothin's changed
same as before
aint no costume party but i wore my mask
never take it off, hate when you ask
couldn't hear a thing
and i don't mind
without you im just killing time
loaded or empty, it's all the same
couldn't pick myself up
and im to blame
because when you lock yourself away
you keep your lips from what they need to say
in the H.O.V. lane to hell
if you gotta go then you might as well
bring someone alone
for the ride
cuz on the road of life
every one will die
forget that mask
go out tonight
make amends
try and make it right
get yourself up off the ground
forgive and live, it all comes 'round
Wow. I know that i havent been on here lately to comment on your works. Sorry. Anyways, I really really like this one. I like the flow of it. And I know the band Bush. Theyre to awesome. Anyways, I like how you can tell in the beginning that supposedly it is ment to be a metaphor for some type of love. And in the end, I love how you can tell them that they can do what they want pretending to be who they want. Really good. Thisis going on my favs! Nice job!
Submission Name: Everyone = None
