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Aches Like December


Author: Voodoo_Lounge
ASL Info:    21/F/OH
Elite Ratio:    2.29 - 408 /588 /171
Words: 22
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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Small i know, but i think it says enough.


Aches Like December



I must remind myself it's Fall
As my heart aches like December.
In small clutched hands
I guard one last burning ember....




Submitted on 2008-10-13 17:49:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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