Description: Yeah, I know this isn't what I usually write about, but I thought I'd try something new. This isn't a true story, or at least for me, but I heard someone talking about her own life and this is what I came up with.
Watched By Jesus -------------------------------------------
Standing outside the hospital
With my baby still inside.
Tears are falling down my face.
The abortion still fresh in my mind.
Now my wrist are bleeding
I need someone to save me.
I need someone here with me.
We believe no one can see us
But we're all watched by Jesus.
I need someone here with me.
I can't take my pain no more
I don't want the pain from before
I will give up all my sins
Because he always wins.
Now my wrist are bleeding
I need someone to save me.
I need someone here with me.
We believe no one can see us
But we're all watched by Jesus.
I need someone here with me.
How many will have to
go through my pain
Through my pain
Through my pain
Now my wrist are bleeding
I need someone to save me.
I need someone here with me.
We believe no one can see us
But we're all watched by Jesus.
I need someone here with me.
i don't get the first part. how can she be standing outside the hospital with an abortion still on her mind and yet, the baby is still inside?
still inside the hospital? if so... ummm...
wrist should be plural.
he should be capitalized, if this is how you believe.
other than that, fairly straightforward and short minus the chorus.
Submission Name: Watched By Jesus
