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    dots Submission Name: Note to selfdots

    Author: Kristen Gudsnuk
    ASL Info:    21/f/CT
    Elite Ratio:    5.62 - 182/229/86
    Words: 251
    Class/Type: Poetry/
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       What is "It"?


    edited to add in more of the "screw the world" stuff

    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsNote to selfdots

    I’ll tell you what to do:
    Take it, caress it and knead it until the yeast fattens in your fingers
    This parasitic tangleweed busting out of your soul

    Foster and ferment it like a good wine,
    Keep it in your dark cellar heart and cradle it nightly,
    Dusting off the cobwebs that grew while you were
    Managing other affairs

    This is your grain of sand, you see,
    This is the centerpiece for a pearl, if only
    You allow this rabid mud to take over, molten paint
    And use the blank walls of your patient eyelids as your canvas.

    What better revenge? ask yourself
    One day you will grab the world’s shoulders and shake it,
    Laughing maniacally and waving that piece of paper in its face
    You were right all along, you’ll suddenly see, in an orgiastic pigswallow

    They will nod at your sparking madness,
    jealous! jealous of you, for once
    the world will have nothing to say, and will nod
    slowly, deliberately, or maybe cry
    humiliated to the bone.

    You can dance on their fingertips!
    You can eat what you want and never get fat
    And your hair will be in a constant state of electrical hay-wire
    Because they will concede that you are a genius.

    So plitter and plot, remember,
    No petty crumble-candy is insignificant enough, powdering in pant-pockets
    Let it crawl into every vein, become the disease that dankens your blood
    But spurs the fever in your heart.

    Submitted on 2008-10-14 21:43:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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