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    dots Submission Name: Read One Read All #1dots
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    Author: Salokin
    Elite Ratio:    1.62 - 0/0/1
    Words: 2069
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Misc
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    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    Description:
       Bullshit


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    dotsRead One Read All #1dots
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    I Crave Life

    You Only Die Once
    Live

    #1 Cause of Death is Life
    Lung Prostate Car Crash Smoking
    Terrorist Attacks Drug O.D. Suicide
    %'s for each + more

    I'm not smart
    I just think...

    There is no thought
    Without emotion (driving force)

    I love truth
    Sometimes I tell lies
    So other people appreciate it too

    Look, Listen, Observe
    Think

    - Jefferson quotes
    --and others

    To the tune of Britney Spears "They drive me craaazzy, I just can't think..."

    People like to be entertained
    And Distracted

    Monkeys are my grandparents

    (You) Overdeveloped Monkey(ies)

    Cougar Hunted

    Entertain them
    (Rome-crash-...?)

    Simple Minds

    Esotericism (want...? ?:-|? )
    Seek within
    (Esoteric not by intention
    But by nature of mind)
    Paradigm Shifting Esotericism
    Esoteric Paradigm Shifts

    Lover of Wisdom

    DayDreaming Life

    Memory Factory
    Memory Maker?
    All the Memories I Haven't Had

    Cubicle = Cow Milking?

    My Corporate Life
    M-F 9-5 50 Weeks
    2 Weeks Off (of life)

    Enlighten Me

    Seeking Enlightenment?
    Apply Within

    "Looks Lived"

    Flex Your Cramps

    Some of the best things remembered never
    happened

    I'm not smart
    I just think

    Grooks?

    "You need chaos in your soul
    To give birth to a dancing star"
    ~Nietzsche

    Help! I'm trapped inside my body

    ---9-19-08

    (Just) ask me
    - I know it all
    - everything
    - can give you the answers

    Where's the mystery!?
    - about the journey...
    - what happens when we have all the
    answers?

    Anything in excess can be a bad thing
    Even moderation

    You only need books
    When you have shitty teachers

    We all wear masks
    Metaphorically speaking

    I only see your mask
    You only see mine
    Except on rare occasions
    When we see each other
    "Vulnerability"
    - grooks - "losing face"

    Curious animals...

    Makin love to my tonic & gin
    Sharing a drink called loneliness
    I could (should) be a movie star
    In the mood for a melody
    Piano man
    It's been me they've been waitin
    To see
    ~billy joel

    I prefer the bumpy roads

    I've got my mojo workin

    Let go of the wheel

    Hold on
    I've got to take this call
    Yeah
    I can talk

    Bad company
    Simple man
    Mamma I'm goin away
    Gonna be a star someday
    Shootin star
    Mamma don't u cry
    ~bad company

    I've seen them
    In concert

    No,
    U haul.

    Ignorance is bliss
    Making the world
    Reek of piss

    I want to roll in the hay
    with skunks
    Preferable to the stentch
    of people
    Keeping them @ bay

    Living through suicide

    Those that can't live
    Afraid to die

    Hiding in happiness

    Floating balloons

    What is a dream?
    If I'm not my body
    All is in my mind already
    Bending spoons
    With perception
    Matrix of the mind

    Ego & sex drive

    Who stopped the rain
    (And) I wonder
    ~creedence cleawater

    Nihilistic

    Bad moon on the rise
    Trouble on the way
    Earthquakes & lightnin
    Hurricanes blowin
    End is comin soon
    Rivers overflowin
    Got your things together
    Quite prepared to die
    ~creedence clearwater

    Age of Aquarius

    World chess game
    Pawns kings queens
    & the men in charge moving pieces

    Workin on a mystery without any clues
    ~bob seger

    (Plant of love strangling the trees that bring them life)

    Inspire thought
    Reflect
    In (on) your alone time

    Distract yourself

    Use Your Power

    Twist perception
    Find paradoxes

    Outtakes of life

    Ill just pay with my fiat money

    I'm stupider than you think

    Infinite possibilities
    With string theory

    Just pat them on the head & walk away

    Spastic people

    I love stupid people

    Mean hippies

    Chevy's @ dry levies
    Whisky & rye
    Singin

    Experience more
    Go bi
    (Why take one road when the path splits)
    Ill take mine straight

    Expression of the human soul

    Can't buy the good stuff

    Why do you do what it is you do
    For people, social escalation
    For plans
    Control of life
    Why do you want what you think you want
    ...
    Enjoy freedom through the
    destruction of beliefs and
    constraining thoughts
    Happiness can only be obtained
    through realization
    Otherwise its just ignorant bliss

    Say nothing

    I experience life in my head

    We don't have a choice in killing ourselves
    Everyday we live we are stepping closer
    to our death
    How much life can you extract?

    I'm bulimic
    Sucking down life till it makes me sick
    Binge & purge
    Then sifting through the remains
    Finding what made me sick
    A nasty process
    Developing a strong stomache

    Clicky hippie

    Death @ any second
    Are you ready?

    Want less

    Things make me happy
    Shop till u drop
    What happens when there is nothing left
    to have?

    Anger
    A fear killer
    (Don't tase me bro)
    If you're not angry you accept & cower

    Question all
    Jekyll Island

    Religion
    Served on a silver platter all day

    Gain the world & lose your soul
    ~zion

    "Drive Carefully
    90% of all people were created
    By accidents"

    "Spare $ for a new life
    Mines broke"
    ~bums sign @ haight & masonic

    Seek enlightenment
    (No buddah reference)
    Through wisdom?

    Paycheck to paycheck
    Or
    Moment to moment

    Hegel thought

    Confuse them
    To make them think

    Head turner

    "Fock in Fear"
    ~rvca ad

    Like frogs in hott water

    Eat beaver
    Save a tree

    Thought collector

    Life ticking by (away)
    The life is ticking?

    Absorb the implications

    We're only all equal
    Once we recognize that we're
    All equal
    (Janitor - bathroom - status - society, we all kept it clean there would be no job, what's wrong with the job, if we all kept it clean - all be like janitors)

    We're only human
    And each day is one step closer to our end
    Our belief systems are only wishful dreams.
    That may or may not be true.
    Feelings are deceteful.
    This might be all we get.

    Don't become deluted
    from the things you want to believe
    and what is

    Quit waiting for the time you're going to be happy and start living now.
    (Believing in the after life only encourages procrastination of the human spirit/soul, living, and truly finding enlightenment - leading people down a path of fake smiles & trying to be good - it eliminates learning from mistakes and truly becoming better, its all an act - fake it till you make it - till you believe it - caught up in the feelings - so easy to come by - almost like signing your soul away to the devil, with each prayer, just to feel good)

    Happy birthday!
    I'm baptising you.

    Isn't the point of free agency
    Learning from your own mistakes?
    Doesn't religion limit the choices you
    can make, limiting your free agency.

    America is like the spoiled child
    Who, at 16,
    Recieves a ferrari
    And hates how their parents got the
    Money
    But still love to drive the car.

    It needed the buildup
    In order to have an effect/impact
    Couldn't come right out in beginning
    Wouldn't have inflicted right emotions

    Deja Vu
    Of a life already lived
    Crossing time and space
    Matching yousrelf from a similar dimension
    Momentary veil lifting
    (Hole in the veil)
    Time is only derived in the psyche
    We think all these things are strung out over years, but who's to say whether its not all slowed down in our mind (falling experiment) and when we get out of sync we experience "DeJa Vu" etc...?
    What's it matter?
    Would it influence your values?
    Then... What's it matter?

    Once you've stated it, then you've limited it.
    The Bill of Rights (& anything else...)
    "God"

    Anarchism is a good cleansing for gov't

    It sounded better in my head

    We never really communicate w/ each other
    Communication requires more than words
    Words get lost
    Feelings can't be transfered
    The only thing close
    Is to try and illicit feelings
    Peoples own thoughts drown out
    And drone others words
    (Turn othes words in drone...
    (Others words become droning
    -the words aren't droning its the persons lack of interest that makes it drone
    All waiting in turn to talk
    Never really receiving
    Never really connecting
    Never really understanding
    We are all really alone

    Sent from my Verizon Wireless BlackBerry




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