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Confusing Perfection.

Author: xXCptn_SephyXx
ASL Info:    22/f/PA
Elite Ratio:    2.65 - 46 /119 /104
Words: 82
Class/Type: Poetry /Serious
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Confusing Perfection.

Eyeliner, eye shadow, mascara;
Anything to glamour the nude mien.

Inserts, tight jeans, corsets;
Anything to perfect the physique.

Outgoing, content, flirty;
Anything to seek the perfect mate.

I sometimes wish to obtain the beautyof a doll—
All the attention would gather in my grasp,
Never to be alone anymore.

But, sometimes I am content,
Knowing that I am not a puppet of the media—
Dressing in my own fashion,
Not to impress,
Or gain sexual attention.

Submitted on 2008-10-15 00:38:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  You should be content all of the time. Easier said than done I know. Thanks for sharing this I completely get what your saying.

| Posted on 2008-10-15 00:00:00 | by grey | [ Reply to This ]

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