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    dots Submission Name: Confusing Perfection.dots
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    Author: xXCptn_SephyXx
    ASL Info:    22/f/PA
    Elite Ratio:    2.65 - 46/119/104
    Words: 82
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsConfusing Perfection.dots
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    Eyeliner, eye shadow, mascara;
    Anything to glamour the nude mien.

    Inserts, tight jeans, corsets;
    Anything to perfect the physique.

    Outgoing, content, flirty;
    Anything to seek the perfect mate.

    I sometimes wish to obtain the beautyof a doll—
    All the attention would gather in my grasp,
    Never to be alone anymore.

    But, sometimes I am content,
    Knowing that I am not a puppet of the media—
    Dressing in my own fashion,
    Not to impress,
    Or gain sexual attention.




    Submitted on 2008-10-15 00:38:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      You should be content all of the time. Easier said than done I know. Thanks for sharing this I completely get what your saying.

    Erica
    | Posted on 2008-10-15 00:00:00 | by grey | [ Reply to This ]


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