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    Author: layDsayD
    ASL Info:    29/f/florida
    Elite Ratio:    3.14 - 262/243/141
    Words: 154
    Class/Type: Prose/Love
    Total Views: 649
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    Bytes: 820



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       ewwww cant beleive i wrote this it like super yuppie gaggggggg but i decided to start a yearly tribute to our love for his birhday every year sinceit is rigth around when we met it will be framed soo dont hold back teh advice


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    Before I looked at her I saw her reflected in your eyes,
    That was heaven, that was completion .
    I cant believe how far we’ve come.
    I keep falling in love with you, every minute every day .
    It is never old not even for a moment.
    We are crashing waves,
    We are every sunset ,every laugh, every tear .
    I am forever yours.
    Because I whisper my secrets softly in your ear you are my best friend Because your eyes light up with love when they smile , you are the father of my children .
    Because when I am weak and unsteady you place your hand gently at my back to support me .You are my rock .
    Because God put you here for me you are my eternal love .
    Because I cannot breath with out you, you are my world .
    I love you Eric




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