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    dots Submission Name: My Father's Thronedots
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    Author: BenCollier
    Elite Ratio:    3.72 - 425/386/88
    Words: 136
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    Description:
       From a new begionning in my life comes new poetry. I only hope this submittal will at least get some feedback. Most importantly I hope my poetry will have a life changing effect on someone. I will glady offer my testimony of how God has changed my life and how he can change yours.

    Your friend in Christ
    Ben


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    dotsMy Father's Thronedots
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    May I never boast except in the cross
    When God has my back I never am lost
    God opposes the proud but graces the humble
    With Christ as my rock I'm never to tumble
    I will boldly come to my Father's Throne

    Humble yourselves under God's mighty Hand
    For in due time he will make you stand
    Come near to God and he will come near to you
    Praise his name in all you think say and do
    I will boldly come to my Father's Throne

    Be still before the Lord and wait patiently for Him
    For the Blood of Christ washes all my sin
    As He says; Never will I leave you, never will I forsake you
    His heart is pure His words are true
    I will boldly come to my Father's Throne




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      youre a hater, and youre all friggin talking about god n sh!t but your got some dude sh!ttin in some other dudes face, go fu<k yourself. i dont mean to be so angry... good write though, it was a cool read through, easy



    tina
    | Posted on 2009-02-20 00:00:00 | by ladiesplanet1 | [ Reply to This ]
      Well this is a prayer not a poem. If you really want to make God proud try to write psalms. Those will need more technique though...
    | Posted on 2008-10-16 00:00:00 | by Paradox | [ Reply to This ]
      I love it. This is the sort of of prayer we should all be offering up instead of the hackneyed prayers learned by heart as children.

    kate
    | Posted on 2008-10-16 00:00:00 | by MumE039sGirl | [ Reply to This ]


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