Absolutely wonderful, such imagery, what an inspiration! I've not read something like this in a long time. Free thought,.... the beauty in the mind is that it does not fill up, and the ink never runs out. Great work, Kudos!
I don't think I had the chance to read something quite like this before. You have an excellent sense of expression and intrigue. Your line of thought makes the reader excited and makes the experience an adventurous one. Since you're new here, I'm even more satisfied because it seems to me this site has just been enriched with another talent. A favorite for sure! :)
I like that in the very beginning you use the period and then after that there is no punctuation; like the thought/thoughts haven't ended.
'We should be damned
To be dammed
Behind a wall of dots'
I love this. The rhytmn of it. I tend to like repetition if it isn't overbearing.
'A river of ebony
Impregnates the mind
Our child of everything
This too, because I feel the same, or at least to me, sometimes there is this place of everything and nothing at all... like it is all combined in some weird way expanding out into the everythingness into the nothingness of it all.
Actually, there is something about each stanza that I enjoy, connect to, feel for, understand.