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    dots Submission Name: The Cleverest Sindots
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    Author: col13x
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    dotsThe Cleverest Sindots
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    The Cleverest Sin

    .........................................................of them all is
    Vanity

    That mankind’s propensity
    To take pleasure in
    All the aspects of our creativity
    Achievement and praise therein
    For its own ingenuity

    Can be and more often
    is
    Classed
    As
    Vanity

    Clever church
    Artful religion

    In its conquest of out spiritual destiny

    To accuse us at every turn
    Of the Sin of Vanity

    To accuse us
    Of the Sin of Vanity



    In all its pomp gold glittering ceremony

    In all its wealth and horded money

    In all its verbiage preached
    To claim knowledge of
    The works and mind of GOD

    It, the church, has the sheer AUDACITY
    To accuse US
    Of VANITY

    Dictatorial policies
    A foot in the mouth
    Of mankind’s GOD GIFTED divinity



    ………………………………………and we’ll forget about gluttony, greed and avarice; sloth, anger and pride.
    We’ll forget about those for awhile.







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      I enjoy your pieces because you illuminate issues and politics and the mundane & you show the beauty of expression.

    Religion has been used for ages to "control" and that is why I believe that spirituality is the divinity that we can interface and communicate with without words or books or someone preaching.

    Very well done!

    love,peace,joy,abundance & smiles to share
    tif ~*~
    | Posted on 2008-10-20 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]


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