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Caretaker


Author: Porcelaine
ASL Info:    27/F/Croatia
Elite Ratio:    3.9 - 880 /703 /256
Words: 116
Class/Type: Poetry /Longing
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Caretaker



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I used to watch as your heart would sink
In the dead of the eve that shivered
In ecstasy of frostbites

I used to tell you you were one and only,
In the grace of the world that wasn't,
To call my own

I used to make you laugh when you were angry
When I knew you were, in fact,
Oh, so scared

I used to sit with you by the water and watch
As you would calm almost as to mimic
The rippling mirrors

But now, I too am silent as you come
And put me to sleep in awareness
That I must rest…sometimes




Submitted on 2008-10-17 22:43:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  OMG! HOW WEIRD BUT LIKE IN AN AMAZING WAY! I LOVED IT BUT I HAVE KNOW IDEA IF I TRULY EVEN GET IT.. UNDERSTANDING THIS POEM WAS LIKE SOLVIING A MYSTERY, A REALLY GOOD MYSTERY, HOWEVER STILL A MYSTERY!!!!

great write
llcollins
| Posted on 2008-10-18 00:00:00 | by L.L.COLLINS | [ Reply to This ]


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