straight forward, I see myself inside this poem, I feel the emotions twirling around me, very thoughtful, each paragraph has some sort of theme in detail, I had to read this twice, your writing is excellent , mystic , great poem
I like the honesty of this poem. You are running from your grief into this other dimension. Yet you can not escape your dark thoughts and drag them there with you and then they drag you back again. I tend to do that too sometimes, but I manage to escape somehow and end up, in my most desperate hours, with my most optimistic poems. Anyway, I've enjoyed this poem.