Sign up to EliteSkills




Already have an account? Login to Roleplay.Cloud
Forgot password? Recover Password

Cry In My Cocoon


Author: Voodoo_Lounge
ASL Info:    21/F/OH
Elite Ratio:    2.29 - 408 /588 /171
Words: 46
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
Total Views: 970
Average Vote:    No vote yet.
Bytes: 263



Description:




Cry In My Cocoon



What can I do when there is nothing.
No antidote or cure to ease,
Nothing I can say
Or do to please.
To know that i'll sleep alone
In our bed, in our room-
I shroud myself in the blanket
And cry in my cocoon.




Submitted on 2008-10-19 19:57:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
Edit post

Rate This Submission

1: >_<
2: I dunno...
3: meh!
4: Pretty cool
5: Wow!




Comments



Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

1. Be honest.
2. Try not to give only compliments.
3. How did it make you feel?
4. Why did it make you feel that way?
5. Which parts?
6. What distracted from the piece?
7. What was unclear?
8. What does it remind you of?
9. How could it be improved?
10. What would you have done differently?
11. What was your interpretation of it?
12. Does it feel original?



167073