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    dots Submission Name: some futuristic black weddingdots
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    Author: blackbird
    ASL Info:    31/male/reykjavik iceland
    Elite Ratio:    2.35 - 194/328/300
    Words: 243
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotssome futuristic black weddingdots
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    you took the dream
    & the eye of the hurricane
    with it's thousands of forests.
    it's heart beating as mine,
    it's fractures
    & the unnecessary suffering;
    all of it
    though all of it's colours
    & old rumors collapsed at your feet,
    still it moved on despite the weather,
    the heat of your arrival
    followed by the stark coldness
    of having known you
    & lost you like the wind itself
    loses force as it travels across
    the continents of solitude,
    the rebellious mountaintops that cut
    through each moment
    like a hot knife through the icy swan
    that adorned some futuristic black wedding
    where no one ever arrives,
    especially not the lovers
    who were lost to the storms
    that these years have provided
    in moments,
    in seconds that lasted longer than they should have,
    lasting longer than the memory of anything.

    there is a ritual to breathing
    that the trees know
    that seems to lose itself
    in the romance of the summer,
    heaped beneath the sweat,
    the uncomfortable silence of dreaming
    that perhaps once,
    amongst the collage of being born
    & constantly dying,
    that there could be rest
    if only for an instant
    in the lucid world of the living.
    i'll take the eyes of all of you
    & remember for you always
    that the heart speaks in whispers
    & that having known you
    was worth it's weight in suffering
    as i have,
    in love
    with the tiniest maps
    that describe you.




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      Beautiful again. How I stayed sane without reading these kinds of things for the last month and a half is beyond me.

    To love at the expectancy of tragedy is to live a brave life, so a friend of mine used to say when he's drunk. I always thought of him as an idiot. But then again, I envy idiots like him, they're the kind who believe themselves to be rich even when you have to always buy them a drink to have some semblance of entertainment in your life.

    =P

    Reading what I just wrote, maybe I'm not as sane as I thought.
    | Posted on 2008-11-03 00:00:00 | by ANGELO | [ Reply to This ]


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