I really felt this piece - floating at times and words falling quickly at other points. I enjoyed the "nature" both figuratively and literally and felt this teaming with life in all of "IT's" beauty and conflict.
love,peace,joy,abundance & smiles to share
O.o Loved it, you have a good knack of pressing the writting pice right into my vision through your writting style in this one, i felt as i read the poem gave the impression of the title more and more perfect title. you seem like you put more thought into how it felt reading it then the composition of the words (no comp prob BTW) and it worked awesomely. keep writing plz