Gulls At The Brink of “Lands End” -------------------------------------------
Gulls At The Brink of “Lands End”
Traces in tactile blue
The simple slide
Sky
“And I
Thrown past thought
Beyond import
Side by side impromptu”
Slide
Catch it
Catch that wing
Reverse revolving
Simple slide
On a vista where I cannot breathe I must breathe hold that moment catch the wing everything is falling
And
Formulation to the dusted
Speckles of light
Dances with water
Marching now
Marching with the clouds
Pomp and fluff of rain
I could fall a thousand miles
On this wing
I could fall forever
Slide
Simple slide
Perfect monument wheels heady
Soaring slip beneath
Floated
In the mouths of rocky crags
Waves suck and draw booming
Crashing
Slide
Simplicity breathing
Air winded compulsion forming
I have become the nurturing of salt
Formed from eggs
Acrobat traversing the edge of spray
And written my psalm
Ovation my call
To the voice of the sea
I slide
Traces in tactile blue
The Simple slide
Sky
Dude, you have no idea how much I love you right now. In a poetic way, of course.
This is...eternally beautiful. I love birds, and a lot of my poems include birds and references to flight and sky and so on.
When I saw the title, I just had to read it.
Little did I know, I was about to be blown away.
This reminds me so much of "Jonathan Livingston Seagull", which is one of my favourite books. Maybe that book is the inspiration for this piece, maybe you've already read it.
If not, I encourage you to. It's such a metaphysical and spiritual journey through the wings of a seagull.
I really felt this piece - floating at times and words falling quickly at other points. I enjoyed the "nature" both figuratively and literally and felt this teaming with life in all of "IT's" beauty and conflict.
Awesome!
love,peace,joy,abundance & smiles to share
tif ~*~
O.o Loved it, you have a good knack of pressing the writting pice right into my vision through your writting style in this one, i felt as i read the poem gave the impression of the title more and more perfect title. you seem like you put more thought into how it felt reading it then the composition of the words (no comp prob BTW) and it worked awesomely. keep writing plz