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    Author: Thief
    ASL Info:    22/male/plainview
    Elite Ratio:    4.8 - 180/80/69
    Words: 132
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Serious
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       maida vaughn, may these words reach you in some way.........


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    call me what you will, but in the end i did what i did. Me, a liar? no no my friend, thats not me at all.then again, your not really much a friend either, now are you? yeah, the words hurt where it hurts most, but i know my place in this world. who knows, maybe i will end up in jail, prison or even dead. but it won't matter. you won't know, and even if you did, i know you wouldn't care. all these words that i put into this....you'll never see them. i know you won't. but just in case you just so happen to run into them....i want you to know, i NEVER lied. and i did, see you. so i don't have PERFECT memory, can you blame me?




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      Wow.... I can totally relate to this poem.

    "then again, your not really much a friend either, now are you? yeah, the words hurt where it hurts most, but i know my place in this world"
    This is the part that most relates to me (not that you care).
    This poem is very well-written, and it is one of my favorites.
    Angel
    | Posted on 2008-10-21 00:00:00 | by bubble_popper15 | [ Reply to This ]


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