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    dots Submission Name: Cataluna and Her Stringsdots
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    Author: meoww
    Elite Ratio:    6.75 - 262/258/143
    Words: 1
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Submitted on 2008-10-23 06:20:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      you were right. (you knew you would be!) i do like this.
    i like it very much.

    you twiddled with it very effectively.
    i enjoyed the guitar....
    and i found myself
    getting up from my chair and
    pouring myself a large glass of
    red wine to enjoy with it.

    have you ever been to spain?
    i am not surprised to hear that you have some
    spanish blood in you!
    i found that i liked it in spain very much
    (although i spent most of my time avoiding
    loud drunk british and german holiday makers)
    and did my best to meet the locals.
    perhaps it was the warm scented night air,
    or perhaps it was the delicious aromas in the
    simple tapas bars and all the delicious wine, but
    i found that in
    good company, i could get totally
    swept away with the
    rhythm and discovered
    many neruda moments. which is why i especially like your mention of' wind and honey and sleep'.
    and i understand perfectly my own interpretation of' perfumed with the soul of laughter'. and it hits its mark (whether you intended me to interpret it that way of not!)

    i think its rather neat that the name of
    your first guitar manages to work its way into this.
    [it must be as special as memories of
    other 'firsts'! ]

    So: let me tell you Jase,
    that this Tom Dick and Harry,
    thoroughly appreciated not only your
    clever arrangement of words
    but also the effort you went to in order to display it
    with a cherubim in sepia.

    so thank you!


    J x


    | Posted on 2009-10-22 00:00:00 | by Alter idem | [ Reply to This ]


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