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    dots Submission Name: Gretulan Section 9dots
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    Author: faded color
    ASL Info:    18/M/That one place
    Elite Ratio:    2.93 - 36/32/37
    Words: 283
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsGretulan Section 9dots
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    After reading the guide, I looked down at the small creature and pondered its insanity. He stood some ways back grinning and swaying, back and forth.

    “So, what did you think? I did quite some work on it.” He said.

    “It was different.” I told him as I walked by. I tucked the scroll into my robe, and began setting up somewhat of a place to settle. I leaned my staff against the wall, and continued to pull a scroll out that was a map of my next target town. The city of Anhulon , surrounded by concrete walls, guards fill the streets, and the king and his people are one. Disgusting. In this place, the castle and town are built together, so it will be easier to sneak about. First I will target the peasants to make their king grow away from them, then I will make the church fall, then the king and his guards. Just as before. I shall introduce this world to my power. I, Nikoli, will seize the world with a fleshy grip, then rip it to shreds!

    “A little dramatic, aren’t you?” The creature said.

    “How do you know my thoughts?” I asked nervously.

    “Necromancers trick. Here, let me help you.”





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    ||| Comments |||
      hi, In the movie The Chronicles of Riddick, Vin Diesel fought and became the new ruler of Necromancers. poe
    | Posted on 2008-10-25 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]
      Ah I see it's a series...
    | Posted on 2008-10-24 00:00:00 | by Paradox | [ Reply to This ]
      I dunno, I was never up for RPG's outside of consoles and some rare PC games. But anyway, why is it so short? You got nothing more?
    | Posted on 2008-10-24 00:00:00 | by Paradox | [ Reply to This ]
      the riddles of ? right on moronically. poe
    | Posted on 2008-10-23 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]


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