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    dots Submission Name: Life As I Know ITdots
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    Author: TheCure91
    ASL Info:    100/assexual/in your but
    Elite Ratio:    1.64 - 5/5/8
    Words: 102
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsLife As I Know ITdots
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    I’m runin’ from my reveries
    Being snapped at by the black and white crabs of my dreams

    Pinchin’ my ankles in ecstasy
    Wanting to scream crazily

    The butterflies in my head
    Wont leave me for dead

    Cloudy skies up above
    Cant find my way back into love

    Fallin’ down the spiral cuff
    The butterflies in y head are getting ruff

    My soul is robed of its self
    Oh! Please can I be somewhere else!

    With her
    Yes her I prefer

    So long spiral cuff
    I’m long gone and through this stuff





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      WEEDIIL! Hi Twin!

    I get to be your first comment! yayness. second time ive read this and i still love it. Keep up the fantastic work and of course i'll keep reading.


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