This distinctly sets the ambient mood of natural surroundings fulfilled with sounds and colors derived from the natures way of breathing in life into an otherwise empty space called Earth. It reminds me of something Enya or Loreena McKennitt might perform. The elements count in this poem. The combination of each and every individual description of a nature's vision makes it dreamlike and surreal. The form is irregular simply because, I presume, you wrote your lines too long and the submission form shrunk them so a few lines were divided automatically in two lines. It happened to me a few times but I can find the connection. I liked these:
"As soft light night summer sings a sanctuary of stars to girdle the moon"
-> here I particularly found interesting the combination of light and night in direct proximity to each other creating an oxymoron.
"hovering mid bough of ambient and hill"
"their flower of creation adds only to the lightness
of the soothing in my soul"
-> I suppose it stands for that the beauty of their being simply caresses ones soul and eases whatever troubles it may harbor.
"Unsheathed Wicca woman of dusk"
-> I liked this one because of it's mystic motif and the fact that it sounds good.
And the ending line:
"Being with you is the closest I will come to a dance in paradise"
-> is an excellent ending.
I was left wondering: who is or what is Cerrunos? Mythological figure perhaps?