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    dots Submission Name: Eternitydots
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    Author: _Osiris_
    ASL Info:    18 Chick Ottawa
    Elite Ratio:    0.47 - 1/5/56
    Words: 244
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 86
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1449



    Description:
       An insight into my life within the last few months.
    He's the boy in the piece.
    I love him but Im worried I will never be enough for him.


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    dotsEternitydots
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    Taking a trip down a path that seems to be lost
    All the trees look the same with the bark peeled back
    Crows parched on branches
    With the river near by roaring as the water crash into the rocks below the fall
    There seems to be no night or day
    Only dusk or is it dawn?
    The sky is beneath my feet as the ground is above

    I can feel my heart beating
    Although when I clutch my chest a hole is found
    My ribs cracked and skin torn
    How could this happen

    In the distant a trail of blood is seen
    Leading me to a willow
    Where a crow is dinning
    With my heart on the menu

    Spider webs draping the branches
    With the black ground peering through the blanket of snow
    The wind passing through the willow
    Trying to resuscitate the old soul
    Only moans are heard coming from the trunk

    Words of love carved into the trunk
    A heart to combine two names into one
    The professed love carved deep
    Keeping the tree still breathing
    The roots run deep and spread
    Like a infectious plague

    The names appear familiar
    With the one name like mine
    Another that i had forgotten
    The first love that cut me deep
    My heart still bleeds
    He means enough to me
    Enough to revive my heart
    To keep him still close to me




    Submitted on 2008-10-25 01:07:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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