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    dots Submission Name: Amen God, Prayer for Calebdots
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    Author: ShadowsofSonya
    ASL Info:    22/female/Arkansas
    Elite Ratio:    3.39 - 300/258/48
    Words: 475
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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       God blessed my son. He really did! I witnessed a true miracle without a doubt. My son's permanent brain damage isn't so permanent. Thank God for every breath.


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    dotsAmen God, Prayer for Calebdots
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    A new update is what I bring today
    An update in the best of ways
    You see my son Caleb
    Had more than just a hurt brain
    It was beyond repair,
    Or at least that's what they say
    Then one night as I bent my head to pray
    A calm feeling came over what I had say
    Dear Lord,
    If you could spare me the chance to say
    Thank you for Caleb, Janetta, and Bubba
    In so many ways
    They're beautiful children that deserve nothing more
    Than a gracious entrance into all golden doors
    Take care of them as you have every day before
    Gaurd them, it's those babies I truly adore
    As I said these words,
    My heart began to melt
    A calm sensation is all I truly felt
    The prayer came harder as I spoke the words along
    It's like God knew already, he was waiting for me to come along
    I continued my prayer as I whispered with a yell
    Please let his brain heal,
    Let his brain reduce the swell
    Tears flowed from my eyes
    Like never before
    You see, I always believed
    Never truly adored
    I thanked him graciously for every waking day
    I apologized for time I didn't pray
    I let him know he's number one
    For the miracles on my son
    You see I truly am a lucky one
    Instead of three being there for the month
    I was blessed in a way, only to watch the healing on one son
    For I was at work,
    So with no protection other than the Lord's almighty one
    God blessed my daughter and my other son
    Yes, the pain is still strong
    But the healing process wasn't at all prolonged
    Anyway, I'll get back to the praying true
    You see my heart was scared but God listened through
    I thanked him once again
    I explained the love I have for him made my heart begin anew
    I ended my prayer with an Amen never through
    I woke the next morning and went to my sons room
    There the doctor's met with me
    Then told my shocking news
    We don't know how to explain what's happening right as we speak
    I said oh and felt I was going to weep
    That's when a smile came across the doctor's face
    Impossible had suddenly been erased
    A change in fate
    Brought around a stronger faith
    You see permanent was no longer permanent in any sort of way
    The doctor's couldn't explain
    It's a miracle in any case
    The possibility of a normal boy is expected to remain
    A full recovery possible,
    In his tiny brain
    A full recovery expected,
    Now that's the answer to a prayer
    From a situation left unfair
    I cried tears of joy
    For my baby boy
    And the possibilities God can make remain




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      Prayer really works, and God hears all our prayers. God bless you and little Caleb, lovely lady. And what a caring and devoted write this is! We all can see that you love him deeply!
    | Posted on 2008-10-26 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]



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