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    dots Submission Name: Dance of Seasonsdots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 35
    Class/Type: Prose/Love
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       On a magical autumn day with the warmth of Indian Summer ~*~
    Acbadadea
    Nemeneshah
    Many Gracious
    Thank Yous
    Lord

    Love,Peace,Joy,Abundance & Smiles to Share
    tif ~*~


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    dotsDance of Seasonsdots
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    Color witness
    Dance of seasons
    Autumn splendor
    on parade

    Movements;

    leaves
    f
    a
    l
    l

    time change

    Songs singing
    Nature to
    Slumber...

    Rest
    Envision
    Dreams of
    Spring
    Blossoming ~*~




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      Beautiful look at our fall season, Tif, as well as our dreams of spring! I'm off in just a few minutes to explore the beauty of Hawaii and will catch up with you upon my return. Keep that lovely pen of yours flowing! Sharon
    | Posted on 2008-10-28 00:00:00 | by Peggy Paris | [ Reply to This ]
      I am already dreaming of spring blossoming. It's something I've got to hold onto as we fall into the deadly grip of winter.

    If only I could stay the movements of the seasons.
    I would stay the world in tropical heat
    and summer sweat.

    I'd set the world on fire.

    ~Asia
    | Posted on 2008-10-27 00:00:00 | by AsiaticFox | [ Reply to This ]
      I always enjoy a celebration of nature, and this delightful verse makes me think of the songs of nature! They are silent, and of course are imagined, but when one views the miracles of nature and creation, there is always an orchestra playing, jubilant in spring, lusty in summer, sometimes colorful, sometimes forboding in fall, and melancholy, peaceful, and restful in winter, but nightmarish and tormented in winter storms!!

    Nice work, lovely lady!
    | Posted on 2008-10-27 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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