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    dots Submission Name: Releasing The Unchained Link of Lightdots
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    Author: col13x
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    dotsReleasing The Unchained Link of Lightdots
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    Releasing The Unchained Link of Light


    By love we are bound as Brothers and Sisters
    To the accord

    And though we live in very different worlds
    We are a unique division by our unity
    Our own awareness as complete individuals
    Our Separation by lives lived differently

    And how we see experience forms our expressions
    And defines our connections to what we perceive as real
    But in all our intricate and definitive conclusions
    There is only one truth residing in the spiritual

    We formulate our faith to our own answers
    By an original comprehension of the light in our hearts
    Yet we know that in this chalice of eternally divine waters
    Is where every mans path and every woman’s journey departs

    And although it may seem we do not know us
    And although we may wander miles between and from where we are
    Still by soul we are united in this sense of the timeless
    Joined by the light of loves single morning star

    Of no consequence is the language
    And description defies the essence of compassion in another’s eyes
    No written word can explain the instinct in the knowledge
    Of how we distinguish our truth; from our lies

    And to all the questions and answers there is only one reply
    And though we feel so very separate the very same pattern links us all
    A human tongue speaking with one voice which cannot deny
    The holy, the universal, the divine, the word eternal;
    Is “Love”

    Standing in the light we are so often blinded
    And led astray by the shadows that we cast
    Our innocence and ignorance by our judgement is reminded
    That we were not the first and none of us will be the last

    Standing in the light there are so many colours
    The light has so many shades and so many different hues
    A radiance with which it draws us closer as Sisters and Brothers
    To the single source of all our truths

    By love we are bound as Brothers and Sisters
    To this accord

    And how many of us wish that we could hold what our hearts demand
    To exult in our souls the reverberating depths of a united consensus
    To release the unchained link in our hand
    To release the unchained link in our hand
    Release the unchained link
    The unchained link
    Unchained link

    In our hand

    Standing in the light there are so many colours
    The light has so many shades and so many different hues
    A radiance with which it draws us closer as Sisters and Brothers
    To the single source of all our truths




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    | Posted on 2008-10-27 00:00:00 | by col13x | [ Reply to This ]
      Bravo!!!

    I really felt this piece and "IT" brought me to the existential - the ALL & the NO THING.

    Your spiritual senses shine in your pieces and I really appreciate your words.

    love,peace,joy,abundance & smiles to share
    tif ~*~
    | Posted on 2008-10-27 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]


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