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    dots Submission Name: Before Ninevehdots
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    Author: Algol46
    ASL Info:    200/m/East of Eden
    Elite Ratio:    2.73 - 1066/1177/572
    Words: 109
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
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    dotsBefore Ninevehdots
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    I conjured her one eve in the Levant,
    She lived so long ago, before the shah,
    Or sultanates, emirs or some pasha,
    I summoned her through esoteric chant.
    And with that subtle spell I would decant
    A lovely girl who filled me with such awe,
    She could have been the queen of Nineveh,
    A sorceress whose kisses so enchant.

    Yet full of fear I fled my cryptic keep,
    Adown the spiral granite stair I ran,
    For I had summoned from an age old sleep
    A being to bring down the likes of man.
    Into the night I fled my vaulted hall,
    To her triumphant, bitter pealing call.




    Submitted on 2008-10-27 19:54:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Another one of your portraits, great, I needed to read something good. I like this woman you describe, dark and wicked yet redeemable, hence the reference to Nineveh. Good work!
    | Posted on 2008-10-30 00:00:00 | by Paradox | [ Reply to This ]
      Excellent! This brings to mind a lovely and enchanting sorceress, spellbinding in her appearance! As all of your work, this is a delightful read!
    | Posted on 2008-10-27 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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