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Submission Name: Souless dots

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Author:	girly101
Elite Ratio:	3.79 - 292/310/149
Words:	58

Class/Type:	Poetry/Dark
Total Views:	720
Average Vote:	4.0000
Bytes:	393

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Souless

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Vampire
She feels of silk.
She smells of death.
She tastes of blood.
She thinks of sin.
Her innocence is scary.
Her beauty is enchanting.
Her love is pure evil.
She will seduce you.
She will touch you.
She will taste you.
Your mind will be hers.
Your heart will be hers.
Your soul will be hers.

Submitted on 2008-10-27 21:51:47 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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||| Comments |||
  okay... very descriptive.... i'm not into vampires but i know some girls like this!

| Posted on 2008-12-19 00:00:00 | by AeThe Lost Poet | [ Reply to This ]
  this was very nice i loved it and im a vampire fanatic so double the enjoyment! keep up the good work and i'll keep reading
| Posted on 2008-10-28 00:00:00 | by MinervaBlu | [ Reply to This ]
  wow talk about the actual thing right here hehehe ( you )
| Posted on 2008-10-28 00:00:00 | by Squall Leon Hea | [ Reply to This ]

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